tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1985110804201112588.post2519630588975914431..comments2023-07-13T13:53:44.945+01:00Comments on Samuel Johnson | BA Hons Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Cutting Edge | Film Review | La Jetée (The Pier) Ba Hons Computer Animation Arts | Samuel Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13788496125789708886noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1985110804201112588.post-57770194355235501642016-01-15T08:13:01.360+00:002016-01-15T08:13:01.360+00:00A very interesting review, well done :)
Just a cou...A very interesting review, well done :)<br />Just a couple of points...always make sure that your film names are italicised and have the date after them in brackets, as this helps the reader understand that what they are looking at is a name, and not a 'thing'. For example, you say, 'It is also the film that inspired Terry Gilliam to go on and create 12 monkeys.' This sounds as though Gilliam was actually creating monkeys! :) You only need the date the first time you mention the film, but it should always be italicised. <br />You also have a couple of typos in there - 'of' instead of 'or' etc... just always proofread to make sure you have written what you think you have.<br />And finally, please could you increase your font size slightly...it's very hard on the old eyes! :)<br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com